Chapter 2 · Practice 4 of 4
Cut extra words and turn "or" chains into lists
Why it matters
Google's short sentences guidance suggests that when you see "or" in a long sentence, consider refactoring it into a bulleted list. Lists make options and steps scannable.
Before:
After:
Also cut filler such as "in order to" (use "to"), "it should be noted that" (delete) and "basically" (delete).
Do
- Use numbered lists for steps or priority
- Use bullets for unordered options
Avoid
- Paragraphs that hide a list of options inside one sentence